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小李，你的近期工作表现总体来说不错，尤其是那个客户关系维护项目，做得非常出色。但是，你的报告撰写方面还需要提高，有些数据不够清晰，逻辑也略显混乱。建议你多参考一些优秀的报告样本，学习一下规范的写作方法。

xiao li，ni de jinqi gongzuo biaoxian zongti lai shuo bucuo，youqishi nage kehu guanxi weihu xiangmu，zuo de fei chang chuose。danshi，ni de baogao zhuanxie fangmian hai xuyao ti gao，youxie shuju bugou qingxi，luojiao ye liaoxian hunluan。jianyi ni duo cankao yixie youxiu de baogao yangben，xuexi yixia guifan de zuozhe fangfa。

Xiao Li, your recent work performance has been quite good overall, especially the customer relationship management project, which was excellent. However, your report writing needs improvement; some data is unclear, and the logic is somewhat disorganized. I suggest you refer to some excellent report samples and learn standard writing methods.

小李

谢谢经理的指点，我确实在报告撰写方面还有欠缺。我会认真学习，改进不足。请问您有什么具体的建议吗？

xiexie jingli de zhidian，wo quezai baogao zhuanxie fangmian hai you queque。wo hui renzhen xuexi，gaijin buzu。qingwen nin you shenme jutis de jianyi ma？

Thank you for your guidance, manager. I do have shortcomings in report writing. I will study hard and improve my deficiencies. Do you have any specific suggestions?

经理

你可以看看公司内部的一些优秀报告模板，或者参加一些相关的培训课程。另外，在撰写报告前，可以先列一个提纲，梳理好逻辑关系，这样写出来的报告会更加清晰明了。

ni keyi kankan gongsi neibu de yixie youxiu baogao moban，huozhe canjia yixie xiangguan de peixun kecheng。lingwai，zai zhuanxie baogao qian，keyi xian lie yige tigang，shuli hao luoji guanxi，zheyang xie chulaide baogao hui gengjia qingxi mingliao。

You can look at some of the excellent report templates within the company or take some related training courses. Also, before writing a report, you can first make an outline and organize the logical relationships; this will make the report clearer and more concise.

小李

好的，我明白了。我会按照您的建议改进的。

hao de，wo mingbai le。wo hui anzhao nin de jianyi gaijin de。

Okay, I understand. I will improve according to your suggestions.

经理

嗯，我相信你能够做得更好。

en，wo xiangxin ni nenggou zuo de geng hao。

Yes, I believe you can do even better.