批评技巧 Criticism Techniques
Dialogues
Dialogues 1
中文
老张：这幅字，笔法虽然不错，但整体布局略显单调，你觉得呢？
小李：张老师说得对，我觉得可以考虑在右下角添加一些点缀，使画面更丰富。
老张：嗯，你的建议很好，看来你对书法的理解也很深入啊。
小李：哪里哪里，我只是略知一二。
老张：不错不错，继续努力！
拼音
English
Lao Zhang: This calligraphy, while the brushstrokes are good, the overall layout is a bit monotonous, don't you think?
Xiao Li: Mr. Zhang is right, I think we could consider adding some embellishments to the lower right corner to make the picture richer.
Lao Zhang: Yes, your suggestion is good. It seems you have a deep understanding of calligraphy as well.
Xiao Li: Oh, not at all, I only know a little.
Lao Zhang: Good, good, keep it up!
Dialogues 2
中文
王老师：这篇论文论证过程略显薄弱，需要补充一些数据支持。
小王：好的，老师，我回去再补充一些实验数据。
王老师：嗯，注意数据的准确性，还有分析的逻辑性。
小王：好的，老师，我一定注意。
王老师：希望你能写出更优秀的作品。
拼音
English
Wang: This paper's argumentation is a little weak; it needs some data support.
Xiao Wang: Okay, Professor Wang, I'll add some experimental data later.
Wang: Mm, pay attention to the accuracy of the data and the logic of the analysis.
Xiao Wang: Okay, Professor, I'll be sure to pay attention.
Wang: I hope you can write a better paper.
Common Phrases
你的建议很好
Your suggestion is good
整体布局略显单调
The overall layout is a bit monotonous
需要补充一些数据支持
It needs some data support
Cultural Background
中文
中国文化讲究含蓄，批评时通常不会直接指出缺点，而是委婉地提出建议，注重语气和方式。
在正式场合，批评更注重礼貌和尊重，语气要温和，避免直接指责。
在非正式场合，批评可以相对直接一些，但也要注意方式方法，避免伤害对方感情。
拼音
English
Chinese culture emphasizes indirectness. Criticism is usually not directly pointing out shortcomings but subtly suggesting improvements, paying attention to tone and manner.
In formal occasions, criticism pays more attention to politeness and respect; the tone should be gentle, avoiding direct accusations.
In informal occasions, criticism can be relatively more direct, but the approach should still be considered to avoid hurting others' feelings.
Advanced Expressions
中文
这幅画虽然用色大胆，但整体感觉略显凌乱，如果能适当调整一下构图，将会更加完美。
这篇论文观点新颖，但论证过程略显不足，建议补充一些实证研究来支撑你的观点。
你的想法很有创意，但还需要考虑可行性以及潜在的风险。
拼音
English
Although this painting uses bold colors, the overall feeling is a bit messy. If the composition could be adjusted appropriately, it would be more perfect.
This paper has novel viewpoints, but the argumentation is somewhat insufficient. It is suggested to supplement some empirical research to support your viewpoints.
Your idea is very creative, but you also need to consider its feasibility and potential risks.
Cultural Taboos
中文
避免公开场合直接批评他人，尤其是在长辈或领导面前。要讲究方式方法，避免使对方难堪。
拼音
Bìmiǎn gōngkāi chǎnghé zhíjiē pīpàn tārén, yóuqí shì zài zhǎngbèi huò lǐngdǎo miànqián. Yào jiǎngjiu fāngshì fāngfǎ, bìmiǎn shǐ duìfāng nánkān.
English
Avoid criticizing others directly in public, especially in front of elders or superiors. Be mindful of your approach and avoid embarrassing them.Key Points
中文
批评技巧在中国的使用场景非常广泛，从日常生活到工作场合都有应用。关键在于把握好场合、对象和方式方法。批评的目的不是为了打击对方，而是为了帮助对方改进。应根据对方年龄、身份和性格等因素调整批评的语气和方式。
拼音
English
Criticism techniques are widely used in China, from daily life to work settings. The key is to grasp the occasion, the object, and the method. The purpose of criticism is not to hit others but to help them improve. The tone and method of criticism should be adjusted according to the age, identity, and personality of the other party.Practice Tips
中文
多观察和模仿中国人的日常交流方式，学习如何委婉地表达批评。
在练习时，可以和朋友或家人模拟实际场景，提高语言表达能力和应变能力。
注意语气和措辞，避免使用过于强硬或尖刻的语言。
多阅读一些关于中国文化的书籍和文章，加深对中国文化的理解。
拼音
English
Observe and imitate the daily communication methods of Chinese people to learn how to express criticism subtly.
During practice, you can simulate real-life scenarios with friends or family to improve your language expression and adaptability.
Pay attention to your tone and wording, avoiding using overly harsh or sarcastic language.
Read more books and articles about Chinese culture to deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.